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Friends?
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Do they count?
I don't have any others -
only the ones unseen
and unheard by me,
writing things seen by me.
Do they count?
I don't want to have any others -
the world is much more difficult
to being taken over,
much more than a web.
And my best friend, a spider,
grins with his chelicerae
like a Cheshire cat,
cuddles my cilice
with his limbs
and he calms me down
that everything's gonna be OK.
Yummy.
I don't have any others -
only the ones unseen
and unheard by me,
writing things seen by me.
Do they count?
I don't want to have any others -
the world is much more difficult
to being taken over,
much more than a web.
And my best friend, a spider,
grins with his chelicerae
like a Cheshire cat,
cuddles my cilice
with his limbs
and he calms me down
that everything's gonna be OK.
Yummy.
A poem written for the Monthly Prompt at 
- its name was "Friends?".
- its name was "Friends?". © 2013 - 2024 Ewa-a-nie-chce-spac
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Afternoon (EwGladka),
This was much more innocent than anticipated, therefore it is rated G . The general poem is just as beautiful as any other form of poetry.
This reminds me of a child whom ventured into the grasslands of the tumbling sea--having to count the many waves that roar, the child is lone and is quite contented under the uncommon circumstance. For a child is never left alone and is always overlooked by a higher individual--a guardian of some sort.
But then, this child... As any would relate--finds the world to be a much more difficult place than it has to be. Finding a struggle in the core of his/her mind, they find comparison between the world and the web.
The link between earth and the spider is surprisingly brilliant. Due to the fact that there are spider's whose web is stronger than the links of a bullet proof vest--one in particular would be The Darwin's Bark Spider
And so the child finds an acquaintance--with one who can understand the connection much mutually.
The Spider...
It smiles so broad and its close encounter, without fright, the child feels absolutely comfort in one of the most feared creatures of this world. The only species that is able to connect with his lonesome revelation of the horrible world...
Absolutely beautiful...
Un Thai
This was much more innocent than anticipated, therefore it is rated G . The general poem is just as beautiful as any other form of poetry.
This reminds me of a child whom ventured into the grasslands of the tumbling sea--having to count the many waves that roar, the child is lone and is quite contented under the uncommon circumstance. For a child is never left alone and is always overlooked by a higher individual--a guardian of some sort.
But then, this child... As any would relate--finds the world to be a much more difficult place than it has to be. Finding a struggle in the core of his/her mind, they find comparison between the world and the web.
The link between earth and the spider is surprisingly brilliant. Due to the fact that there are spider's whose web is stronger than the links of a bullet proof vest--one in particular would be The Darwin's Bark Spider
And so the child finds an acquaintance--with one who can understand the connection much mutually.
The Spider...
It smiles so broad and its close encounter, without fright, the child feels absolutely comfort in one of the most feared creatures of this world. The only species that is able to connect with his lonesome revelation of the horrible world...
Absolutely beautiful...
Un Thai